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Reading Response 3

After reviewing Chapter 9 in the textbook and the important information being emphasized, I want to improve my writing techniques and follow articulate instructions in writing as an engineer ! Informative paragraphs with a purpose is a key part of the success of a well written essay. In order to provide details and well written information, Outlining in bullet points is major in this sense. I am familiar with many different journalists and professional writers as I have used my networking skills to create these relationships and almost all of the individuals I know said that detailed outlining has helped them better word and write their informative paragraphs. In this class I want to incorporate writing detailed outlines and trying to succeed with these in different formats to see which one works the best for me. Great examples are bullet points, numbers, and even small written paragraphs with key words next to them to symbolize meanings and information. This class consists of many different types of assignments to improve the engineering tools of my writing skills. I believe that it is important to have knowledge in how to write the correct way and in my opinion little things like good outlines and a meaningful thesis or topic sentence goes a long way with establishing the essay. In the past I have not used outlines much and even when I did use them, they were not as informative and detailed as they should have been to help me better write the essay. I recently did use one in my previous school and I did see the difference compared to a not so detailed one. I intend to establish myself with writing detailed and proficient outlines in order to help me succeed in this class’s assignments and also in the future of my writing career and professional career.  

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Reading Response 4

The 5 stages of the Writing Process are very important to follow when trying to complete a well written paper. Starting off with Planning, planning is an important stage in the process because it sets the tone. It is the involvement of ideas getting jotted down, brainstorming, researching, bullet points and even a specific type of outline being organized before the writing begins. This helps the writer to have an easier process when getting his thoughts down before starting. The next step is drafting which is when the writer begins to put their ideas into writing format officially. The purpose of this is to not worry about perfection but to focus mainly on formatting for the paper. Consider this more so like a warm up routine. Revising is the next step which is to review the information in the draft. This stage can consist of re-arrangements of words, sentences or even paragraphs. This helps to improve the format of the paper. Editing is the next step which can include grammar and spelling checks. This is very important to do before you send the paper in. The piece of writing should be polished to perfection after this step which leads to the final step, publishing. Publishing is the final stage which includes the actual submission of the paper. This can include an assignment, email, or even just a print out. I would say I was well taught to use almost all of these before I got to college. Once I started college, I was able to improve on the uses of them in detail more. Personally I put a lot of time into Planning and Drafting to make it an easier task for me when I am preparing to complete it. This takes a lot of pressure off of me especially when I have a well written draft and planning page because it is a lot of information to go off of.

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Reading Response 5


Collaboration in my opinion is a very useful skill not only in school but in life itself. No matter what career you are pursuing it will be something everyone should have some knowledge in. Even if you are running a small business start-up, eventually you have to hire employees under you because it is impossible to run a single person business successfully at a high rate. Collaboration, whether in school or at work, brings both benefits and challenges. On the upside, working together boosts productivity and brings in a variety of skills and perspectives, making projects more thorough and accurate. It also helps team members understand each other better and integrates new employees smoothly into the organization. Plus, collaboration encourages learning and growth, as everyone shares knowledge and skills. However, collaborating isn’t always smooth sailing. It can take longer due to communication needs, and there’s a risk of everyone agreeing too much without questioning ideas—a phenomenon known as groupthink. This can lead to lower-quality work. Also, documents can end up disjointed or with some team members doing more work than others. Sometimes, individuals might lose motivation or conflicts can arise among team members.To make collaboration work well, it’s crucial to plan carefully, communicate openly, and address any issues that arise. By doing so, teams can reap the rewards of working together while minimizing the challenges that come with it. Personally, my past experience in collaboration academically has prepared me for my future career that I am pursuing in tech. I actually enjoy working in groups and picking my partners brain’s, as I am absorbing more knowledge for myself. I do believe there is always room for improvement though ! Networking skills are something I want to continue to improve. Working in collaboration is something that can definitely help me with that. 

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Peer Review 1

In the class peer review, Berke and Mahir both gave me some key points to finalize my 1st draft submission. I was confused about the citation so they explained to me how to get to that. I also was confused on how exactly to annotate so they both explained to me how to better word the text. They both also told me that using the textbook information on the elements helped them write the draft much smoother so I took their advice and used my resources around me to proficiently complete my draft. 

              When reviewing both Berke and Mahir’s 1st draft of the Analysis Report I gave them small tips for grammar to prevent losing points. I also informed them on more advanced words to help them make their papers sound more professional. They told me they were going to take the advice as they both made some changes in class. We all discussed if it was difficult to complete the 5 page requirement and some said yes and some said no. I told them that word proficiency and reading the actual report many times would help them. Reading it over will give them a better understanding of the report so they can then write on it in a more detailed format.

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Engineering Proposal/Presentation

          One way or the other the purpose of creating most technology and devices is to make people’s lives easier. Over the last century, many innovations occurred to make the chores of man easier, to finish a task faster, and to be done with more efficiency. Dealing with clothes is a task that takes a lot of effort and takes a lot of time in every home, from washing to drying to ironing and folding. Technology such as a washing machine, dryer, and ironing machine each carry out these specific tasks, but have you ever thought what if there was a machine that could do it all? Doing laundry the old-fashioned way takes up a lot of time, space, and effort. People are stuck juggling between different tasks, dealing with all sorts of problems along the way which takes up more energy. If you have a lot of clothes to deal with, ironing and folding can be tiring. With all the tasks rolled into one machine, laundry day would save time, energy, and space, making life a whole lot easier for everyone.Some ideas that our group has proposed were Heated glasses that prevent fog, GPS Glasses, and Translation Devices. Starting with the fog – fog-preventing glasses, we think it is a struggle for those who wear glasses to walk through very humid weather or any place that may cause fog in the glasses. A solution to this struggle would be to replace the glasses themselves and have them clear their vision at every moment during the given circumstance. Unfortunately, we found out that these glasses already exist. Next, I came up with the idea of glasses that would give you directions on where to go so that you don’t have to keep on looking at your phone and always see straight ahead of you. Recently Google glasses were discontinued and although they no longer exist, the idea and solution to our problem were there. Lastly, we have translation devices. The translation device we were discussing was a translation earbud that allows you to understand someone who speaks a different language, like the previous ideas, this one already exists. They are the Time Kettle M3 Language Translator and are said to be fairly accurate.  A washing machine that washes, dries and folds clothes would require advanced robotics and artificial intelligence.  As effective as it is on its own, there is a manual option for almost every feature. The washing machine allows an individual to stop any process that the machine is going through at the moment. The way it does this is by breaking the electrical circuit preventing power from passing through. This is not an emergency stop for the machine, it is more of a regular stop that could be used in an emergency. The washing machine would start by washing the clothes like any other one would, but as the process goes on, it also allows the clothes to dry for a few minutes afterward. This is similar to an all-in-one washer where it tumbles and cleans when you add water, detergent, and clothes. The spin cycle, which comes after the wash cycle, removes excessive water from the clothing to dry it. Through the vent, the machine takes in fresh air from the room and warms it up to dry the clothes. Steam inside the machine escapes through the vent to keep it dry, just like in independent vented dryers. Taking the all-in-one washing machine a step further, once all the clothes are dried, there are sensors all around the inside of the machine that detect fabric types and levels of moisture. The way it does this is by sending out various lights and seeing how different fabric reflects or absorbs light. After each piece of fabric is detected, a robotic arm built similar to one you may see in arcade machines would grab a piece of fabric and send it through a rectangular plastic foldable  The washing machine that folds clothes is also feature-loaded making them user-friendly since all you have to do is press “start”, go wherever you need to, and come back to see all your clothes folded nicely. The materials are going to be similar to a normal washer and dryer, this includes materials such as Aluminum, Copper, Steel, Silicon, Electronics etc. Dryers can also be changed in many ways, depending on the material and process, for example, the shell can be improved to have heat retention for longer by installing the addition of insulation to the dryer. A correctly constructed shell is one of the most important processes in the drying process for building this machine. The shell has to keep its process efficient, and it has to be dependable for years to come, we wouldn’t want the customer to complain that the machine has broken down because of faulty material only a month into its purchase. Not only would using the wrong materials in one part break down that part of the machine, but it would also be affecting what’s around it and wear on all of the other components with which it shares that space. Materials required for the machine’s construction are stainless steel that needs to be used due to its durability, corrosion resistance, and ability to withstand high temperatures. It is essential for the inner drum, exterior casing, and various internal components to ensure longevity and reliability. High-quality plastics are required in certain parts of the machine, such as the detergent dispenser, control panel, and exterior trim. These materials should be sturdy, heat-resistant, and resistant to chemical degradation from detergents and other cleaning agents. Aluminum alloy needs to be used for lightweight components such as folding arms or mechanisms. Aluminum offers strength and durability while also being lightweight, making it suitable for moving parts within the machine. Heat-resistant fabrics given the ironing functionality, the machine may incorporate heat-resistant fabrics or materials for the ironing surface and related components. These materials would need to withstand high temperatures without deforming or releasing harmful chemicals. Microfiber or Non-Stick Coatings are needed to facilitate the folding process, the machine might feature surfaces coated with microfiber or non-stick materials. These coatings would help prevent clothes from sticking and make it easier to fold them neatly without snagging or wrinkling. Electronic components including sensors, control boards, and actuators, would be essential for automating the washing, ironing, and folding processes. These components would need to be reliable, energy-efficient, and capable of precise control to ensure optimal performance. Rubber and silicone seals would be used to prevent water leaks and ensure a watertight seal in critical areas such as the door or detergent compartment. These seals should be durable and resistant to degradation from water and detergents. Insulation materials may be required to regulate temperature and reduce noise emissions from the machine. These materials would help maintain consistent heating for the ironing function and minimize disturbance to users during operation. These materials would provide the necessary strength, heat resistance, and reliability to handle the tasks proposed in this innovative laundry care.Incorporating Artificial intelligence (AI) into such a machine could significantly enhance its functionality and user experience. AI algorithms could optimize washing programs based on fabric type and soiling level, adapt ironing settings to user preferences, provide smart folding assistance, monitor maintenance needs, personalize user interactions, and optimize energy efficiency. While AI integration adds complexity and cost to the design and development process, the benefits in terms of efficiency, convenience, and user satisfaction would be substantial. If promoted properly it would be an investment to its creating company.Building this machine would take a marginally larger amount of time than just building a washing machine and dryer separately. This is because it would be mounted vertically and attached onto each other. The manufacturing process of just the washing machine takes around 2-3 weeks depending on the materials and how easily they would be able to be manufactured together. Adding on top of that the dryer, would take less amount of time because the functions of a dryer are simpler than a washing machine putting it at a timeline of around 1-2 weeks. Now addressing the most complicated part of the machine, the folder, it would take a considerable amount of time to program the software, find the right materials, and labor to put it all together which adds to my estimation of around 3-4 months for only this part of the machine. How much time it would take to combine these machines, it would take around a day or two for the machining of combining them. My total estimation brings it around to about 4-6 months for only one of our machines. Now we would improve the rate at which these machines would be manufactured but that would be after we have established ourselves in the industry and have the funds to make an assembly line for rapid access.The cost of the innovation is going to be roughly around 7 thousand dollars for us. This is between material cost, motors, fans, cabinet closures, drums, and control panel. Of course we will be completing the project with stable and reliable equipment at an affordable cost for us giving us a solid margin to receive a good return on investment. Our high quality motor will cost us around 1200$. Fans will cost us around 1100. The Cabin closures such as hinges, latches and handles are very important to have top notch quality when building so this will run us about 1300. The stainless steel drums will cost us about 700. The Control panel will also be essential in a successful machine so this will be a necessity at 1000. This will consist of components such as buttons, knobs, displays and electronic circuitry. Lastly the folding unit on the bottom would run us about 2500 while giving it efficient grabbing without snagging and completed neatly. The Width of the machinery will be separated into pieces. With the washer, dryer, and folding components they will all equal around 80 inches in height. The width would be around 25 inches and the depth would be about 28 inches. The weight of the machine will be roughly around 200-210 lbs. The dryer and washer will both be equally spaced in capacity giving it a dimension of 2.5 to 5.0 cubic feet.The main purpose of most technology is to make life easier. Our innovative technology aims to do just that by washing, drying, and folding clothes automatically. Using advanced technology, it will save time, energy, and space. It may take about 4-6 months to build and cost around $7,000, but the convenience it offers makes it worth the investment. This machine could change how we do laundry, making it much easier for everyone.

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Technical Description

The PlayStation console was created by Sony Computer Entertainment Inc., a subsidiary of Sony Corporation. The development of the original PlayStation was led by Ken Kutaragi, a Sony engineer who is often referred to as the “Father of the PlayStation.” Kutaragi played a pivotal role in the design and development of the console, overseeing the incorporation of advanced technology and guiding the project from its inception to its successful launch in 1994. Additionally, a team of engineers, designers, and developers at Sony Computer Entertainment contributed to the creation of the PlayStation, working collaboratively to bring Kutaragi’s vision to fruition. Ken had obtained a clear understanding of technology and imagined what it would look like at its highest ceiling. His background in electrical engineering put him in a perfect position to enhance and share the development of a revolutionary gaming console along with his passion for gaming. PlayStation 5 is the most popular innovation in gaming technology history. Sony Interactive Entertainment being the primary innovator behind years of development. As Sony Interactive Entertainment (SIE) is up to their fifth console, it has a rich history behind how they got there! They have always pushed the limits of technology in gaming. In 1994 the original PlayStation console was released, the starting point for their historic evolution of high-tech gaming.  When it was originally released, the console introduced new features and different advancements. The PlayStation 2 was the first console to have the feature of a built in DVD player, while the PS3 introduced cell Broadband Engine architecture for enhanced processing power and solid speed. After the successful release of the PS4, Sony began to visualize the future by going even farther. The company aspired to continue innovating in gaming technology by providing a more powerful and realistic gaming experience. Leading into the announcement, Sony’s research team began exploring different hardware tech options that can be used in the next console. This research included different experiments with advanced graphics, processing power, storage solutions and trying out the compatibility. In April of 2019, CEO Kenichioro Yoshida announced the release of the next generation’s console. This left a large amount of excitement amongst gamers worldwide. In October of 2019, Sony presented details specifically with hardware modifications of the console. This pertained to its specialized AMD processor, high speed storage, ray tracing and support for 4k gaming at high rates.  

           The “Motherboard “is a crucial component of the console. The motherboard serves as the main circuit board connecting all the important hardware pieces of the system. The motherboard provides physical slots, sockets, and connectors such as the CPU, GPU, memory modules, and storage devices. This confirms the connection between the cables and allows them to communicate with each other. The motherland also contains different circuits which allow high speed data to be transferred between the connectors. This movement allows the gamer to access game data, textures, and assets at high speed.  Power distribution is also another role the board plays. This ensures that the power supply unit receives the correct amount of voltage for operation. In summary, the motherboard plays a critical role in the PlayStation 5 by facilitating communication, transfer data, distributing power and management throughout the system.   

          The “Central Processing Unit” ( CPU ) serves as the central processing brain of the console, responsibile for completeing instructions and exploitiing different calculations while controlling multiple tasks required for gaming and multimedia applications. The CPU handles game logic, which imvolves processing player inputs, executing rules and contrlling the events in game. This also obtains the physics simulations for objects, characters and different modes within the game world. The CPU helps the console process its audio data, which includes applying effects to the sound. This enables immersive 3d audio experiences. The CPU manages system level operations and swrvices which include memory mamnagement and multitasking along with input processing. The CPU also works in conjunction with the other hardware pieces needed in order to have a successful PlayStation 5 . It uses the GPU and memory to enhance performance and to increase the effiiciency. Overall the CPU plays a critical role in the console mainly because it’s capabiloities to contrubte to the console’s abilituy to deliver high qualioty gaming, fast speed data and remarkable graphics.  

The “ Cooling System “ of the PlayStation 5 includes a double side cooling fan. The System includes a sizable heat sink with a standard heat pipe design, optimized to match the performance of a vapor chamber. To efficiently cool the System on Chip ( SoC ), the PS5 utulizes a liquid metal thermal conductor placed between the SoC and the heat sink. Additionally the system is equipped with a 350- Watt Power supply. Son’y design of the PS5 aims for reduced energy consumption compared to the PlayStation 4, particularly during suspended gameplay states.  

    The “Power Supply Unit” ( PSU ) serves essentialy function of the console by converting alternating current from a power outlet directly into the direct curent, making it functionable for powering the internal componenets of the console. This component is versatile because it can work with different voltage levels, ranging from 110 volts to 240 volts. This means it can be used in various regions worldwidw. It was invented to please the wide range of voltages.  

            The GPU in a PS5 is to process and render graphics for games and other visual content. It is responsible for creating the images you see on the screen, making them look realistic and immersive.  It is bulit using a 7mn orocess and is based on something called Oberon graphic processor. The proccessor is oretty big steady while holding up the powerrful graphics.  

          All in all the Playstation 5 has many different technical pieces inside to help it function at such a high and efficient rate for gamers. Each piece plays an imporant role in working together to enhance the performance of the console. These components synergize to not only produce stunning visuals but also to demonstrate the creativitiy behinf modern gaming hardware.  

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Lab Report Analysis

With my major falling under the STEM foundation, I have always found it interesting to continue to learn and research more about the field. My major is Computer Engineering. Unfortunately, City College does not have a Cybersecurity major as an undergraduate student because that is what I primarily want to work in. I chose Cybersecurity as a hobby before a career because I have always been good with technology, starting with a simple tablet and then eventually moving onto a smartphone and laptop. With this assignment, I used the CCNY (City College of New York) Library Database to help me find different reports about STEM majors. I was able to find one which caught my eye about an Earth Lab project which seeks to integrate computer mediated communication technologies into science education, fostering collaboration, problem solving and scientific thinking among students while informing the challenges associated with coordination and integration of networking.  In Chapter 19 there consisted of 8 elements of structure to completing lab reports. The eight elements stated were: Title, Abstract, Introduction, Materials and Methods, Results, Discussion, Conclusion, Acknowledgments, and References.  

       Starting the Lab Report with the title, I believed Dennis Newman followed the first element in the textbook. The title in the lab report is supposed to provide informative information enough to attract and have the reader stay. This will of course help the reader decide whether the topic interests them or not. The informative title also helps the writer save time by using different services for the location to be more proficient. The collaboration was emphasized through underlines and underscores both within the scientific laboratories and among scientists worldwide. The writer also used words familiar to a reader’s mind. The application to science education extends the collaboration concept to both the education itself and suggests that children learning it should be treated as a young professional scientist. It also shows that problem solving not only enhances the thinking aspect but also molds the mind and models the active process in doing science.  The title paragraph sets the stage for the sections while also pointing out the challenges of local and long-distance networks in the education system and options provided by the Earth Lab Project.  

                The abstract paragraph is meant to summarize the entire report but also mirrors the structure with the introduction, methods, results, discussion and conclusion. Readers of abstracts are most interested in what questions motivated you to continue to do your homework to begin with.  A well-written abstract paragraph also meets the readers’ intentions on staying up to date on research with minimal time spent.  In this report the educational focus specifies the target audience as upper elementary school students and middle school students. This shows that the project is made to inform the procedure for this set of age. The abstract paragraph also consists of Curriculum Unites and Software Development while mentioning that the specific information units created for sixth grader students in geography related areas such as weather and climate, and plate tectonics.  It also coordinates science activities while emphasizing coordination among students such as studying a specific type of data and cooperating in navigation simulation games with fossil data.  

                The Introduction paragraph’s purpose should be to state the purpose of the abstract and then provide a summary of the report. In this report the author stated a broad summary of the report while also adding small details about how scientists use local and long-distance formulas to complete communication. I feel the author did not follow much of the textbook’s formular in the introduction sentence and put more information in the abstract that should have been in the introduction paragraph. The introduction paragraph sets the tone and emphasizes the hypothesis and informativeness to cater to the reader’s preference.  

               After the Introduction paragraph comes the Materials and Methods. This element can be formatted and used in different ways. In this report, the author used a basic separation between the text provided. It is important to describe the methods enough in detail and I do think the author did so in this case. He started with a list of procedures created and detailed the report’s explanation.  The separate pieces of Apple Modified Software consist of Interface Filer, Writer, and Simulations. I believe that the author did follow the format of element in the textbook.  Interface was the network interface created to provide easy access to files, data and programs. Filer was a database management system to give easier and quicker access to common databases for group work. Writer was a special version of a word processing program which is special for elementary schools. Simulations was a navigation game so that the students can navigate their pilot ships simultaneously.  In the textbook it l} also states that it is important to assume your readers are unfamiliar with the particulars of your experiment but know just enough about the lab procedures to evaluate your efforts. Credit to the author for completing these tasks.  

          Results come after the Materials and Methods element when forming a lab report. In my opinion results are the second most important part of the results behind Introduction because in the results, the data is stored in which must be backed up by the information that you provided throughout the report. I think the author did follow the procedure which was given in the textbook. In the report the results are stated as servings and different outcomes when using the forms of long-distance networks.  

                   Discussion is the next step of the eight elements in the report, which I also think are essential in completing a successful report. This I believe should be done with multiple people to answer any questions or support the hypothesis or opinion that was explained during the introduction. It is important to present the most important findings and trends that will catch the reader’s attention as well. In the discussion the author did not follow the exact procedure for the element explained in the textbook because straight from the results is where he explained the end procedure and outcome in the experiment. In the discussion, it is important to know that if the findings do not match previous studies’ results, suggest possible explanations for the differences.  

            As you can see, there are many ways and formats to complete a well-written lab report. Dennis Newman had his own unique way of creating this form of writing, which I personally thought was very well written. It is clear to show that technology is the future. This stems from work, entertainment and everyday living tools. Ever since COVID 19 hit, remote working and just technology has hugely improved at such a rapid rate. Personally, I chose to get into the tech field because this is a growing industry and is a high paying industry as well. It is also a passion of mine to grow with technology as well. The more you use it, the more familiar you become with all aspects of data, software and technology itself. In this lab report, the goal and mission were stated in the conclusion reminding readers of the report’s purpose and thoughts. It also summarized the most important implication in the report. This is the final paragraph so when writing a report, it is essential to include persuasiveness in the text. This is the last time you convince your audience about the information you are speaking about. He also did not introduce any new information, so this gives him a check for following the element in the textbook.  

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Self Assessment

Before the semester started, I had told myself that I wanted to improve many skills in which I thought this class can help me achieve. Based on my prior higher education and prestigious institutions, I always thought and was told that I was a solid writer. Honestly out of all subjects in school, writing is honestly one of my favorites. When I type, I freely let go of what comes to mind, like when people journal. It may be different for specific assignments, but I mostly see it as the same perspective. I would not say I set any specific technical goals for myself but overall, I just wanted to improve the basic skills of writing and make the most of the course in terms of networking and building relationships to better my career as I pursue my degree in computer engineering. Overall, I can say I enjoyed the course, the assignments that were given to us were not boring to me and I looked forward to completing them.  

       Throughout the semester our professor provided us with many different assignments and information for everyone to better understand the core of writing for engineering. I learned to appreciate different writing styles and improved my skills in drafting, revising, and editing. I got better at setting goals and understanding what my readers expect. Working with classmates helped me learn from feedback and made my writing stronger. I explored several types of writing and used various tools like images and videos. I also became good at finding and using reliable sources. Overall, I now see writing as a powerful tool for expressing ideas and I feel much more confident and skilled as a writer. Not only did I believe this would help me on this course but also in life in general. Having the ability and skill to research and the knowledge on how to navigate through different resources is an essential skill that can benefit for job purposes.          

      Thinking back on the Technical Description, I did find that assignment a little challenging mainly because I did not have prior experience using the school library online to retain links and sources. I did think it was beneficial for me because I did complete it correctly and received a good grade for my final submission.  

   Writing alone is a tool that is well needed today. Writing is in our everyday lives, starting from our phone. We text everyday which is considered a source of writing. People who work in journalism, finance, tech, etc. All jobs demand some sort of writing. In school, writing is its own class, subject, major so that is self-explanatory. Writing is putting words on paper or a screen to share ideas, tell stories, or give information. It is a way to communicate with people without speaking. You can write many things, like essays, letters, emails, stories, and reports. Writing helps you explain your thoughts clearly and can be used in school, work, and everyday life. It is like talking but with words you read. You get better at writing by practicing and learning new things. Writing also lets you be creative and express your feelings. It is a powerful tool to connect with others and share what you think and feel.  

           Peer review was another example of a great assignment given to us to network and brainstorm on our assignments. Peer reviews were helpful during the semester because my classmates gave me feedback on my writing. They looked at my work and told me what they liked and what could be better. Their comments helped me see things in my writing that I did not notice before. For example, they pointed out if my sentences were confusing or if I missed any valuable information. Then, I could fix those things before handing in my final draft. By listening to their suggestions and making changes, my writing got better each time. So, when I handed in my final draft, it was much stronger than my first draft. 

          Unfortunately, we were not able to finish our last in-person assignments in person due to the protest activity on campus, and I would have enjoyed presentations in person better than via zoom. I think that the audience would even have a better understanding and even more questions about our invention that my group had created. Overall, I enjoyed this course very much and I would recommend it to anyone who is second guessing to take it. I enjoyed being instructed y professor Jacobson and she did an excellent job of giving us assignments that can help the students better understand the techniques of writing as an engineer!  

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